River of Stones #2

Under the Bridge

A world awaits

under the bridge.

Crawdads hide,

water spiders hurry,

minnows scurry

under the bridge.

Toes tickle,

sticks prickle,
rocks tumble,

car tires rumble

under the bridge.

Revision:

In the world under the bridge

crawdad homemakers scurry to their rock homes,

skinny water spider teenagers zip along,

minnow businessmen bustle about,

dragonfly helicopters buzz above 

and thunder rumbles from the cars overhead.